Black Ghost

I agree, the wings are the best part. The way you've detailed them is really amazing looking.

What a delicious looking cake. :) And I think the fourth tower picture is the best.

Ah, but that's not an infodump, it's description, which works beautifully when done right.

Yeah, there are good and bad infodumps...although most of the time they're bad. XD

Haha, I seems no one likes e-books...they are rather annoying, though. :lol:

He looked to be no older than nine and had a strange necklace around his neck. Where else would the necklace be? Change the sentence to "He looked to be ...

Though I don't critique poetry much, I'm pretty sure the poem should speak for itself.

6/10 looks like a cover of something...

"Or maybe you could read something worthy of your age," she smirked, eyeing the book with displeasure at her sister's choice of literature. This last phrase isn't needed. Eventually, Mrs. ...

7/10 Interesting way to ride a swing XD

8/10 XD

7/10, not much to say...

Oh wow. :lol:

...what has this world come to? :?

I actually started writing a month before I joined YWS XD, which was about a year ago. But ever since I was elementary school I've wanted to write stories, and ...